11407591 Looks like I also was onto something with my comment two chapters ago about the game evolving:
Sunset knew very little about this world, but this seemed like an aberration. A monster joining an adventurer’s party? This game did not seem ambitious enough to include an experimental mechanic like this; it was just a dumb diaper RPG for crying out loud!
Sunset breathed a sigh of relief. She was that much closer to getting home, now that she had a party that was looking fairly powerful. Now… how much do I owe Beatrix?
Probably way more than you can afford.
“Yeah!” Flutters was excited with her idea. “Cause she looks just like you, Sunset. So, you know. Sunrise, Sunset… It works!”
Poor Sunset. Everyone is comparing her to the goo monster.
“No! No.” Sunset said. Beatrix did not need a taste for blood on top of everything else. “Let’s… turn them in for the reward.”
Aww! Can they at least punish them first?
It would probably endure you to Trixie.
And let's be real Sunset Shimmer. You know what you really want deep down...
What kind of story sells video games with things like that in it?
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Looks like I also was onto something with my comment two chapters ago about the game evolving:
I like it.
Can't wait to see more.
Probably way more than you can afford.
Poor Sunset. Everyone is comparing her to the goo monster.
Aww! Can they at least punish them first?
It would probably endure you to Trixie.
And let's be real Sunset Shimmer. You know what you really want deep down...
Is to wear a shirt and pants.
Glad to see you're still writing this!