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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
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Hehe. I like how you called it the X-station.
Welcome back my good man. Your work still brings a smile.
Well, we're off to a promising start, at least. NGL, I half-expected the game to give Sunset the Jumanji treatment and suck her inside, but this works too (either way, it seems like she'll have to beat the game to escape her predicament... and she just set it at the highest level of difficulty. Oh dear...)
Good luck with your future writing endeavours.
Love this concept! Please keep writing this awesome idea <3
its good
so whats next
Good to see you back! I really enjoy your fics. I usually don't read eqg fics, but this one's got me hooked!
Whenever I see a post from you it is always sure to be great. I also deffo get being burned out by MLP.
Liked the avatar meme lol but good story too
Absolutely fantastic read! Can't wait to see where this goes!
love your work
Your work is always amazing, and i'm glad that you're still making things!!
It's not just a game anymore.
This is going to be one hell of a fun ride I am sure.
Great work as always
Excited to see this update! Hope Sunset's in for a long adventure XD
Great setup. Looking forward to more!
Pleasantly surprised that you decided to continue this. Poor Sunset. I cannot wait to see how she gets out of this.
Ooh, it seems like I was onto something in the previous chapter.
I'm sooo looking forward to whatever comes next...
So a party has been assembled, has it? Well, now it's on to the actual questing.
Looking forward for the quest to properly begin now.
).
Wonder what state Sunset will be in by the time she reaches the end of the game (and whether she manages to beat it or gets a bad end instead; that Brutal mode is gonna be... brutal
I think we are going on a proper adventure here now
11248440 I can only imagine what a "Bad" ending might involve.
Glad to see this is still alive!
Not bad I like.
Just imagine how bad the first dungeon or boss encounter is going to be in this game.
In traditional H game style, she must lose to every type of monster once to unlock all the "scenes" lol.
I'm curious what the other rings from Beatrix's staff would have done to Sunset
A sucker bet that it’s twilight who’s the witch lol
This story is unlike any other diaper story I have seen. I like how it has an adventure element too. Nice job.
One thing I noticed, amidst the delightful collection of kinks provided in this chapter, is how the game somehow seems to have evolved (going from turn-based to real-time combat and eliminating the fast travel option — perhaps in favor of an open world ? —, much to Sunset's dismay). I wonder if the Equestrian magic isn't drawing on Sunset's videogaming knowledge to "improve" the game and make it more interesting (in every sense of the term, including the Chinese curse one). Shimmy's in for quite the experience, if that's the case...
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Who wants to bet this magic is using characters from the real world? And that they will have embarrassingly accurate memories of their time here when Sunset finally gets out?
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It's a strong possibility.
I think it would be a waste though. She would be fair more useful and entertaining as a exposition and lore master type character, especially with Sunset refusing to learn anything about the game.
Plus there's always the references.
Hey! Princess! Change your diaper!
Bad Sunset! You never skip the lore! The lore is your friend!
Rainbow Dash is going to be so pissed she was cast as a maid.
As usual, your descriptions, audible, tactile, and visual, never disappoint. Either in characterzation, or in scenery/outfitting.
This is definitely amping your stories strong points, and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Daww! Red-faced, squeaky set Shimmer is adorable!
Okay, that's pretty cute too.
I love EqG Rainbow Dash. She's such a sweetie.
Poor Sweet Sun Shim!
Rainbow Dash is totally going to investigate this isn't she?
Dang, the universe is really being cruel to Sunset today. And by the universe, I mean you.
It's the little details that makes this feel like it's Sunset talking. I love it.
You've gotten way too good at shaming your characters. First Ember, now Sunset. Fetish fics shouldn't make me feel bad for reading them, but somehow this scene does the trick.
Here's hoping Sunny isn't completely and utterly broken at the end of this.
You know you like this Sun Shim.
Ewe indeed faux Sunset. Eww indeed.
Somewhere, somehow, poor Luna died of embarrassment, knowing that a student was thinking about sucking on her tits.
Embarrassed Sunset Shimmer remains adorable.
Which is worse? Having the world turn into a diaper land, and having all your friends remember it?
Or being stuck inside the TV when they come to visit, and having them not only realize that you took and played such a thing, but seeing you acting as a part of the game?
Now we get to the best part of any fetish fic.
Cute girls getting into and out of cute outfits, and the embarrassment associated with it!
Well green is her color.
Daww!
Sunset Shimmer is a real princess now!
A real pamper princess!
Rarity would appreciate the irony.
Yes!
Yesss!!!
Okay, I'm surprised that given your affinity for nerds, brats, and twin tails, that Juniper Montage hasn't at least rated a reference yet.
Sweet little Cozy Glow was literally teased forever before making a appearance.
Yes you are Rare Bear. Yes you are.
When you want to bottle Rarity's essence and keep it all for yourself.
I'm not.
This interaction here, is pure gold.
I can easily imagine Sweetie Belle and Rarity interacting like this.
I got a email in my pocket, and I think it's starting to melt.
Dear Crazy Coco. What would you do if a soggy girl came up to you in a wet diaper? Sincerely, Butter Stuff.
Well Butter Stuff, if a soggy girl came up to me, I'd give her a change of diapee, a suger laden treat, and some sage advice....
DON'T. EVER. SKIP. THE. LORE. BECAUSE. IT. MIGHT. BE. THE. DIFFERENCE. BETWEEN. LIFE. AND. DEATH!
Sadly, for all your brilliance, you are not a true geek Sunset Shimmer.
Now there's a idea.
I would have enjoyed seeing that, I can't lie.
That might still happen you know. Heck, who knows what shenanigans the bards get up to in this game.
Did somebody say Bard!?
Not now Pinkie Pie!
Let's hope for Sunset's sake it's purely a friendship gimmick and not a dating sim, else things are going to get awkward fast.
Mmm so cute!
You missed a chance to make the chest pocket a big heart though. Maybe it's for the best though.
I don't think Sunset can take much more embarrassment!
That seems like a oversight for the game not to give her anything starting out.
Plus, shouldn't she wash her feet before putting on new shoes?
That's it Precious, smack that booty! Give us a show!
It could be worse Sunset. You could be wearing booties!
Daww! Whose a cute little ruffle butt?! Yes you are! You're a cute little ruffle butt!
Silly Sunset! Haven't you ever heard of the curse of the reoccurring shop keeper?
Hey! How do you know you would get a buff, hairy, surely type?! You might run into Flash.
Suri's modeling outfits make a call back. I approve.
Yeah if the designers are putting more fetish stuff in here this early, then Sunset had better be really concerned.
Anything might happen to her. And I do mean anything!
Do the dance Princess! I don't want to do the dance! I said do the dance Princess! Fine.
"Hippity Hopity. My ears are quite long, my rear is quite puffy! I sing and I cuddle and you can't stop me snuggling... said Sunny Bunny to sweet little girl!!!"
"Five more times!"
"Why?!"
Something like this ensues.
Would you believe that I've read this particular chapter six or seven times since it's come out?
And I haven't noticed that these two were Flim and Flam until just now?
That's the power of anime girls. Everything else becomes background noise.
Would you prefer more Spankies Twixie? Come on, be a good little girl for Auntie Shimmer.
Put it on Trixie! Put it all on!
Paci's are totally going to be a special item aren't they?
Dang. Trixie must really like those Spankies.
Who wants to bet that freed slime monster will come back and become a member of Sunset's party?
I'm curious about how the Griiffons will try to break their new pets
11359996 Depends on how kinky the RPG gets, and how kinky the Equestrian magic wants to make things.
Could be worse. Could be a shape matching game. The shapes being sex toys.
Daww! I knew it! You do like Spankies don't you Twixie?!
Half expected Sunset to lose it at that name, not going to lie.
Forward march ruffle butt!
Dang. Remind me that Ponkers hasn't been in one of these since Princess Dashie with your references to hammer space!
Okay that parasol is too cute!
Blended peaches. Possibly spoon feed straight to you.
Aww! Look at Sunset using her sippy cup like a good girl!
Better her than you.
Don't be Sunset. It's probably a shipping mechanic.
Through the power of puffy pamps!
After all, you might be changing some of theirs before you're through. I bet it would be a great way to fill up that affection meter.
I believe they call it a "tease".
That's unfortunate. So she's not going to be wrestling bears anytime soon?
That seems horribly impractical for real world travel.
You should have given her a orgasm while you had the chance.
Or it's the best choice you could have possibly made. I guess we'll see.
Dang Sunset. All this time... You could have been wearing pants!
No! Poor Flutters!
Do not violate butter stuff!
Well this just turned dark.
When your magic is countered by a band of leather.
Poor Trixie has totally been through this before.
I'm starting to get the feeling that you really don't like her character.
Poor Sunset. You were too young!
Better hope your resident creeper comes back soon.
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She'll probably be the reason why the girls escape. I would have preferred Karma for the sisters myself, but I guess we will see what happens.
What kind of story sells video games with things like that in it?
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Looks like I also was onto something with my comment two chapters ago about the game evolving:
I like it.
Can't wait to see more.
Probably way more than you can afford.
Poor Sunset. Everyone is comparing her to the goo monster.
Aww! Can they at least punish them first?
It would probably endure you to Trixie.
And let's be real Sunset Shimmer. You know what you really want deep down...
Is to wear a shirt and pants.
Glad to see you're still writing this!
Aww, we missed that? The embarrassing changes would have made for great bonding opportunities!
Huzzah! The soggy girl is dry again! And maybe even getting used to her new attire!
On the bright side, maybe those two wind up hitting it off.
Probably not.
Poor Trixie.
I mean, we all knew that was coming.
Please tell me capital punishment is still a thing in this country.
Well that's one way to top off. Better hope you run into more monsters though, before she needs to feed on party members.
Shame. Sunrise I'm still not keen on, but Flutters? That would be cute.
Sunset sitting in Flutters lap (wearing a adorable printed bib) all the while being cooed at, drinking milk, and having her hair stroked.
Say ahh!
Sure Sunset.
Then maybe you should wear her? You're already pretty chummy.
Now that's just cruel. Give Sunny some entertainment. I bet even a picture book would be stimulating right now.
Dorky Twilight is best Twilight.
Daww! Evening is such a cutie in that outfit!
Not surprising, given your selection.
Nerd flirting already?
Um did she let go of Sunset's hand or interlock their fingers? I'm confused.
I'm sure there's a place for you to make it a three way Sunrise.
Come on, you've known Sunset for a week at most.
Oh yeah, it is that bad.
Is it a healing session? Because that sounded really steamy.
Also I'm kinda of disappointed that Evening didn't join the party. I guess it makes sense but still... Slightly disappointed.
I mean, as long as they don't stop to shoot some blackmail.
Enter Rarity! Or Suri. Or Coco. Or Sassy Saddles. Plaid Stripes? Honestly, which would be worse?
Hopefully Sunset gets something doubly cute for the next round. Although it will be hard to improve on Rarity's designs.
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Thanks for the catch! That intertwining fingers line was supposed to be a few sentences up. Fixed it now.
What are the odds one or more of the Rainbooms will end up getting sucked into the game too before all's said and done?
Also, Sunset better hope the water temple isn't as annoying as Ocarina of Time's.
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No, thank you sir.
Especially for Evening's attire this chapter.
I love her adorable padded bottom in that cute pantyhose and skirt combo.
And those heels! So cute and smexy!
I can't wait for her to start wearing some fetish fashion librarian getup.
Sometimes I wish that there was an option to give a like to individual chapters like you can on webtoon. This was rly well written and deserves an extra like dammit.