Well, we're off to a promising start, at least. NGL, I half-expected the game to give Sunset the Jumanji treatment and suck her inside, but this works too (either way, it seems like she'll have to beat the game to escape her predicament... and she just set it at the highest level of difficulty. Oh dear...)
Sunset hit the skip button the second it appeared onscreen. She really wasn’t interested in the story for this game. Or anything about it, really.
Bad Sunset! You never skip the lore! The lore is your friend!
“You really kept me waiting.” ??? the maid said.
Sunset’s Princess character spoke with text. “I’m sorry, Rainbow. I was sleepy."
Rainbow Dash is going to be so pissed she was cast as a maid.
She blinked. No… no it definitely had not. She realized that that comfy feeling of her bed seemed to wrap around her waist to. It felt plush, tight, and plastic-y. Kind of like a…
As usual, your descriptions, audible, tactile, and visual, never disappoint. Either in characterzation, or in scenery/outfitting.
This is definitely amping your stories strong points, and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Rather than a scream, this got a squeak out of her.
Her face had never been so red.
Daww! Red-faced, squeaky set Shimmer is adorable!
She didn’t even kick her skirt free from her ankles, making her look like an overgrown toddler who had a habit of stripping and running around.
Hehe. I like how you called it the X-station.
Welcome back my good man. Your work still brings a smile.
Well, we're off to a promising start, at least. NGL, I half-expected the game to give Sunset the Jumanji treatment and suck her inside, but this works too (either way, it seems like she'll have to beat the game to escape her predicament... and she just set it at the highest level of difficulty. Oh dear...)
Good luck with your future writing endeavours.
Love this concept! Please keep writing this awesome idea <3
its good
so whats next
Good to see you back! I really enjoy your fics. I usually don't read eqg fics, but this one's got me hooked!
Whenever I see a post from you it is always sure to be great. I also deffo get being burned out by MLP.
Liked the avatar meme lol but good story too
Absolutely fantastic read! Can't wait to see where this goes!
love your work
Your work is always amazing, and i'm glad that you're still making things!!
Bad Sunset! You never skip the lore! The lore is your friend!
Rainbow Dash is going to be so pissed she was cast as a maid.
As usual, your descriptions, audible, tactile, and visual, never disappoint. Either in characterzation, or in scenery/outfitting.
This is definitely amping your stories strong points, and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Daww! Red-faced, squeaky set Shimmer is adorable!
Okay, that's pretty cute too.