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I need an explanation. I don't understand exactly why Xav ran back to Twilight in the tunnel. He bolted thinking he was going to die or something like that. So why go back? He was terrified before that moment. Either I missed his reasoning or something changed.
The story feels a bit off sense then. The start was very slowz but definitely picked up after the tunnel encounter, but I'm still not sure I understand Xavier's motivations in all this. Some of it is due to the lack of history and backstory, but it feels to me there's information that I'm just not seeing. For that matter, was his reasoning for coming here in the first place just to fire arrowsctor Quill? I don't remember another reason being mentioned.
I like the world being built, but I'm just a bit lost; everything is still covered in shadows.
TÃpico soldado yanqui, se mete en una guerra que no es suya y luego se queja.