First chapter, it was nice seeing them have a fun night out, and without the lingering Twilight problem.
Second, nice way to bring focus to Big Mac. I don't recall if Cheerilee appeared in Crimson at any point.
Third, that was a nice summation of Rarity's life up to this point, and you did a good job with FPR.
And this chapter is quite a concept. It's pretty wild seeing the far future of Crimson. I wonder what the Crimson characters would think about how important they are to the future. I did think for a moment that that was a bit silly, but is it really? It was neat seeing everyone in this AU, aside from the absent Hitch.
First chapter, it was nice seeing them have a fun night out, and without the lingering Twilight problem.
Second, nice way to bring focus to Big Mac. I don't recall if Cheerilee appeared in Crimson at any point.
Third, that was a nice summation of Rarity's life up to this point, and you did a good job with FPR.
And this chapter is quite a concept. It's pretty wild seeing the far future of Crimson. I wonder what the Crimson characters would think about how important they are to the future. I did think for a moment that that was a bit silly, but is it really? It was neat seeing everyone in this AU, aside from the absent Hitch.