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Talk about killing the mood.
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Yeah no kidding.
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Hey, don't let what he said get to you. Now are there flaws to be pointed out, sure. But to go on that much of a rant and express just how much they hate it, that's uncalled for. Or at least, keep it to PMs to avoid attracting unwanted negative attention for your story. That's all, bud. Anyways, don't be discouraged by what he said too badly and just keep on doing what you're doing, fam.
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thanks. I really appreciate it. And for making me feel better.
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Still, if you're gonna go on that much of a rant, or show that much disdain, do it privately. Don't ruin the fun for others. Bottom line is, it's fine to express your dislike, but try not to ruin it with your negative attitude for anybody else who enjoys the story and the author who works hard on this story.
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Just be a little more considerate is all. Either way, I'm gonna stop this to respect the author and his story. Final words, agree to disagree.
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Right, poor choice of words. My bad.
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And what would you rather do, have Abacus Cinch destroy the time line? Because of her, she corrupted the timeline and nearly destroyed the world.
She already tries to ruin the Rainbooms' lives via Christmas and Time Twister. If he didn't did what he had to, she could've done something worse.
Yeah,he makes mistakes, but sometimes one has to make hard decisions.
Plus it's not his fault that both Starswirl and Celestia kept doing things behind his BACK. Starswirl kept acting before thinking, I mean look at what he did to Stygian. And Celestia could've been a bit more open minded by caring for her sister. Plus if she had done a better job at helping Sunset she wouldn't have become a bully.
Besides, didn't you read the first few chapters of the story.
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You can't please everybody. *sighs* everyone's a critic.
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Plus what he showed was a different version. Different worlds, different timelines of how things could've been.
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And what the hell man? When I first read your stories, I never gave one bad review. Why the hate?
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If it makes you feel better, I'll do so for future reference, but when Celestia and Starswirl have a face to face with him. And Sunset would also tell him this.
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sorry about that. Had a friend from out of town visiting and he messed around with my computer.
. Note to self, never leave your stuff unprotected.
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See, what happened was, I was in the bathroom and my friend decided to give a peak.
He saw our conversation and he didn't like it, thought that what both of us did was unnecessary, so he deleted it behind my back. I didn't notice until he told me before he left.
I felt really embarrassed to leave him alone like that.
Really sorry about not telling you about it.
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But don't worry.
I haven't forgotten about what you said.
Maybe I did get a little too personal when I first wrote this.
From now on, I'll be lot more considerate and mindful about what I write in the future.
You have my word as a fellow writer and as a friend. I won't let it happen again.
Awesome story, hope to see more soon, keep it up.
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Yes, even a stubborn fool like myself can admit when he's been wrong.
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As I mentioned I didn't think straight. I didn't exactly have an editor when I first started this story.
So I apologize for that.
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I know it's a bit much to ask and I know you have a lot on your plate as it is. But when you have the time, would you like to help me edit this so that it can be done the right way. If you don't mind that is.
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Okay, okay, you're right.
It's just that...Forgotten Friendship kind of left a dark mark on me, kind of like that Anon-A-Miss fiasco. A ton of folks feel that way too.
But then again, I wasn't fair on Wallflower either. I should've understand from her point of view and learned more from her perspective. And I was completely rash about it.
I'll see if I can make some changes into the story. And do things right too.
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Come to think of it, I had no idea of that posibility. I must've overlooked that part. And I kinda made that one up and didn't think that plot through.
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He was acting like an overprotective parent that had just found out what the kids had done without them knowing.
But quick version, on the current chapter I'm working on, he did apologize to them.
It's like this, from the one remake of Revelations part 1, the part where he tampered with the crown to teach Starswirl and Celestia a lesson, he was just angry and didn't think straight. He was angry at Stygian and Luna because they let themselves be corrupted by darkness without seeking help, he was angry at Starswirl and Celestia because one casted them aside whilst the other didn't pay attention and didn't help them, and he's angry at himself because he wasn't there for them when he needed them the most.
He couldn't help Stygian because he was looking for the Sirens, the first friends he's ever made, cause he figured that they'd listen to him considering that they were friends since he was a colt. And he couldn't be there for Luna and Celestia because he was defending Mt. Aris from Yagh and Cthulhu, who the latters wanted to destroy everything.
He left for the other side cause as Starswirl banished them to modern times, he arrived at the 1900's. As he did some good over the years, he was busy looking for the Sirens, a desire if you will, to see them again.
And when he was away since the 90's, one part vacation whilst the other he was looking for the Sirens, he assumed that everything would be fine, but when he heard what was happening, he rushed back and was scared out of his mind something had gone wrong. And he scolded them because he felt responsible. He made some of the artifacts and he created the portal and they were his responsibility. He felt he failed as a protector and he was scared that innocent people were to have gotten hurt and it was his responsibility, which he blamed himself.
As for how he scold them them over misunderstandings, like their friendship being torn apart, (And of which I will add whilst rewriting it) he knows what it's like to be blamed for something he didn't do, cause being a Pegasus raised by Unicorns, being constantly judged and harrassed for something he didn't do. Plus he also hates seeing friends fight and he felt helpless not being able to stop it. Plus he was just scared that people will get hurt and more would be caught in the crossfire.
Deep down, from what happened between Equestria and near CHS, he felt like he failed and the promise he made to Gusty to help protect and maintain the balance of Equestria and friendships of others be strong.
Anyway, that's why he did what he did. They were his responsibility and he was Twilighting a bit, and he felt like he failed, and that he wanted to make it up to them. Like I said, he did apologize to them and will arrange something and made it up to them, a surprise if you will.
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If you dislike it, why bother to keep coming back and reading it? If you don't enjoy it, simply move on and leave. Don't suck the fun out for the rest of us. We want to enjoy it without having the constant dread hanging above our heads.
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And how do you know that you're not making him feel frustrated or discouraged? You say that he's takes your criticism into account and is supportive of what you say, but is he truly behind that or is what you say and how you say it tell a different tale.
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Agree to disagree.
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Got it.
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And thanks BTW. I may always be stubborn when it comes to defending stories, but I really appreciate this.