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Based on the available tags (tragedy.) I think the patient is more dead than alive.

Nice story.
I can't wait for the next chapter.

To those wishing for another chapter, I am currently making one as we speak. However, I am starting to hit writer's block. So I will need ideas in Dms on how to continue the story, and maybe even an editor if possible.

If you're interested in either, my Dms are always open. Thank you, and stay safe my falcons. 👍

I mean you already have asked multiple questions that need answers and have a lot of different things you can do from here!

The number one thing you obviously missed out on apparently is Conflict between Twilight and Chrissy with Twilight just accepting her needing Saving but hey lets see...
really hope the main 6 are not going to be annoying..... its REALLY EASY to write them to be annoying!

obviously you can just go wild on stuff like :
Changeling history ,
changeling society
Chalgeling culture
changeling Religion

just in general whats currently going on with the changelings ...
how Ponies view changelings....
obviously there is a history between chrissy and Celly you hinted at so interested where you go with that

nice story it really sad