yes this is very good. I don't know if you are accepting requests/suggestions, but here are a few of my own:
1.) Clone again, but male this time. Focus on her learning/exploring the differences between them, before devolving into rutting. no pregnancy please.
2.) Her mom talks to her about the book, explains things to her so she knows what she is doing, what it means, etc. Also makes sure that she understands what sex is normally for, so she doesn't get the wrong idea from the book and can be safe and responsible. This could also lead to a more open, explorative relationship between the two. Maybe they could even "read" together in the future.
10617103 Glad you liked it! The more ideas the merrier, not sure if I'll get around to actually do any, but if it interests me enough then I might in the future.
Perhaps there could be a "holographic porn" chapter? Or maybe a "portal" chapter, in which she's able to stick a tongue through a portal that leads between her legs, giving her easier access to herself? Maybe the latter could also end with her penetrating herself with her horn?
10629178 Not too sure what you mean by holographic porn. But the portal idea was a small idea that I had put down already, didn't think of the horn part though, so if I write it I just might have to include that. Thanks!
What I mean is that Essence finds a chapter for a "visual stimulation" spell. She casts it, and sees magical 3-dimensional images of ponies (or other creatures) boning eachother. She gets a basic sex ed lesson in the process. (If you can consider live demonstrations without the warnings about STDs and unwanted pregnancies to be "sex ed".) Then again, it might not be as sexy as creating a magical doppelganger, but it could still be fun.
[...]didn't think of the horn part though, so if I write it I just might have to include that. Thanks!
nice story
yes this is very good. I don't know if you are accepting requests/suggestions, but here are a few of my own:
1.) Clone again, but male this time. Focus on her learning/exploring the differences between them, before devolving into rutting. no pregnancy please.
2.) Her mom talks to her about the book, explains things to her so she knows what she is doing, what it means, etc. Also makes sure that she understands what sex is normally for, so she doesn't get the wrong idea from the book and can be safe and responsible. This could also lead to a more open, explorative relationship between the two. Maybe they could even "read" together in the future.
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Thanks!
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Glad you liked it! The more ideas the merrier, not sure if I'll get around to actually do any, but if it interests me enough then I might in the future.
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I'm sorry, peas forgive me.
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Thanks, buddy! I have a few more things in mind. I might have them out in the new year.
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Yes that was a thing I was thinking about, a mirror would definitely make sense ^^;;;
Didn't remember that Rainbow Dash ^^;
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Perhaps there could be a "holographic porn" chapter? Or maybe a "portal" chapter, in which she's able to stick a tongue through a portal that leads between her legs, giving her easier access to herself? Maybe the latter could also end with her penetrating herself with her horn?
Just some ideas for you, in case you want them.
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Not too sure what you mean by holographic porn. But the portal idea was a small idea that I had put down already, didn't think of the horn part though, so if I write it I just might have to include that. Thanks!
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What I mean is that Essence finds a chapter for a "visual stimulation" spell. She casts it, and sees magical 3-dimensional images of ponies (or other creatures) boning eachother. She gets a basic sex ed lesson in the process. (If you can consider live demonstrations without the warnings about STDs and unwanted pregnancies to be "sex ed".) Then again, it might not be as sexy as creating a magical doppelganger, but it could still be fun.
You're welcome.
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Took a little while to get back to this and edit, but thanks for the corrections nonetheless. They have been fixed.