None of her hints had worked. But now, on the first night of her romantic week-long break with Sky Stinger, Vapor Trail plans to confess it all. But despite all the love they shared... how could he ever possibly understand?
It's good to see you writing again. And you were right, this is very different. I'll admit, I was worried when I saw this and I almost didn't read it. To me, fetish stuff can get weird, off-putting, and kinda boring if it's something you're not into. But this chapter was really well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so I guess you did your job right. I still have some concerns going forward so we'll see how into it I am long term.
10612861 I very much appreciate the fact that you were wiling to give it a chance, and I'm glad you found this first chapter to be well-done. I completely get your point, too. This isn't everyone's thing at all, and so my goal to start with wasn't to just write a "clop" fic with a fetish in it, but to write something deeper and with a lot more going on. I think I have a solid plan for the rest of this thing, but yeah. It's a lot to take in.
I'm honestly just happy there seems to be relatively positive reception overall, especially since that wasn't what I necessarily thought would happen.
my goal to start with wasn't to just write a "clop" fic with a fetish in it, but to write something deeper and with a lot more going on.
Based on this statement and the first chapter, i'll probably be fairly invested in the story. It depends on how much of it is clop and exactly how that is done.
Your writing style is marvelous, got me on my seat the whole time invested in the feelings of the chsracters. Very well done, Im impacient to read the next chapter!
Hoo boy, im loving the plot on this one! Spanking fics for me can be almost as much about the framing and emotions involved as the actual act, and this one really delivered. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
author, consider me interested. im definitely looking forward to the next chapter
It's good to see you writing again. And you were right, this is very different. I'll admit, I was worried when I saw this and I almost didn't read it. To me, fetish stuff can get weird, off-putting, and kinda boring if it's something you're not into. But this chapter was really well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so I guess you did your job right. I still have some concerns going forward so we'll see how into it I am long term.
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Thanks! I hope to not disappoint!
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I very much appreciate the fact that you were wiling to give it a chance, and I'm glad you found this first chapter to be well-done. I completely get your point, too. This isn't everyone's thing at all, and so my goal to start with wasn't to just write a "clop" fic with a fetish in it, but to write something deeper and with a lot more going on. I think I have a solid plan for the rest of this thing, but yeah. It's a lot to take in.
I'm honestly just happy there seems to be relatively positive reception overall, especially since that wasn't what I necessarily thought would happen.
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Based on this statement and the first chapter, i'll probably be fairly invested in the story. It depends on how much of it is clop and exactly how that is done.
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I'd say there's a good chance it'll be something you'll want to read! Although I can't make any guarantees... But stay tuned!
Your writing style is marvelous, got me on my seat the whole time invested in the feelings of the chsracters. Very well done, Im impacient to read the next chapter!
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Glad you're enjoying it so far! I'm working on the next chapter, and I hope to have it complete soonish.
Hoo boy, im loving the plot on this one! Spanking fics for me can be almost as much about the framing and emotions involved as the actual act, and this one really delivered. I can't wait to see the next chapter!