This is great! The whole of it the tone. Your respect for war and the toll it takes. The politics subtle and blatant yet at the same. Genuine emotion is there to not let everything feel hollow and dead.
And can I just say that this is my perfered mlp setting sure other storys have great worldbuilding. And yet?
It always rings a lot hollow that ponys have. What amounts to Gods on their side. And they control what LITERALLY BRINGS LIFE TO THE PLANET.
Considering Luna went Nightmare her fault or not? Their has bound to have been more damage then wha t was shown on the tv show?
You know?
Lets not forget they control the weather?
Magic is also crazy of powered.
Anyway, I just want to applaud your imagination, your willingess, and your Im sure world building!
So thank you for this chapter. You have a fan!
Have a kind day!
Ps. Its funny how pretty much mind. So a grain of salt. Every character that wasnt a pony got the friendship beam. Let alone that poor Zecora episode. And you know they left her in the forest. Lol. I know there is Reason and all but? After all that?
Some typos here and there that a good proofer could clean up, but overall quite enjoyable. I look forward to seeing where this story goes and hope it reaches completion.
Keep it going looking good so far
It's kind of scary a world full of magic, creatures with abilities, powers, and spells all gone, guess the world went back to normal lol
What is normal?
This is great! The whole of it the tone. Your respect for war and the toll it takes. The politics subtle and blatant yet at the same. Genuine emotion is there to not let everything feel hollow and dead.
And can I just say that this is my perfered mlp setting sure other storys have great worldbuilding. And yet?
It always rings a lot hollow that ponys have. What amounts to Gods on their side. And they control what LITERALLY BRINGS LIFE TO THE PLANET.
Considering Luna went Nightmare her fault or not? Their has bound to have been more damage then wha
t was shown on the tv show?
You know?
Lets not forget they control the weather?
Magic is also crazy of powered.
Anyway, I just want to applaud your imagination, your willingess, and your Im sure world building!
So thank you for this chapter. You have a fan!
Have a kind day!
Ps. Its funny how pretty much mind. So a grain of salt. Every character that wasnt a pony got the friendship beam.
Let alone that poor Zecora episode. And you know they left her in the forest. Lol. I know there is Reason and all but? After all that?
Some typos here and there that a good proofer could clean up, but overall quite enjoyable. I look forward to seeing where this story goes and hope it reaches completion.