I like to say that your choice was not what I expect. If I’m being honest, I would’ve chose Twilight cause, she has more sense than the rest of your choice staff. Mainly, I find Celestia completely unstable due everything that happened. And let's be honest; do you really want her to be your queen, after what you described here?
Anyways, PM when you have a minute. I like to talk about your next move in this story. I like you to hire me as you’re personal adviser/military general for this story. Now with real life money, but more of allowing me to be heard, nothing more.
After reading it all i'am looking forward to reading more. Great start can't wait for more.
If I may?
I like to say that your choice was not what I expect. If I’m being honest, I would’ve chose Twilight cause, she has more sense than the rest of your choice staff. Mainly, I find Celestia completely unstable due everything that happened. And let's be honest; do you really want her to be your queen, after what you described here?
Anyways, PM when you have a minute. I like to talk about your next move in this story. I like you to hire me as you’re personal adviser/military general for this story. Now with real life money, but more of allowing me to be heard, nothing more.
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You think Celly is bad. Let's just say when I get to Twilight she puts a whole new meaning on the word 'Control Freak',
Can't wait for chapter 2
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Your wish is granted
Eh, sorry man. The hooves for hands thing was a turn off.
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You try eating with the same thing you walk on. After that you will praise the almighty hand! 8P
Very good intro.