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Poor Twilight. I've probably said this before but I like to think that this time she'll become a more 'perfect' fusion, much like in the Fly 2. Well, as far as that thing was 'perfect.'
Also, Luna's being petty and Celestia's being overemotional. Wonder how that'll work out, especially now that Twi's back
Hmmm, I didn't think Twi would willingly come back to the castle. I expected her to try to somehow get in possession of the telepods and begin another series of twisted experiments... You surprised me a bit there And I love surprises
Anyway, I wonder if anypony will be able to help her at all... or if Pinkie will finally spill the beans
Grammar Nazi attacks again!
the first "to" is not needed.
selfishness
[All caps hurts my eyes ]
the first "upset" is not needed
2356358 Haha, this is awesome! It's like I have 2 pre-readers now! Thanks for the corrections. These chapters are getting longer and things are slipping by me so it's appreciated.
So, yeah, Twilight's back at the castle. Don't worry, though, things will get pretty crazy in the next chapter or 2.
2355648 Yeah, I was trying to make Celestia pretty vulnerable, not knowing where Twilight is and all. Not gonna lie, that scene took me DAYS to write. I wanted to address the whole Nightmare Moon thing at some point, and show that it could still be a point of contention between them. Things said in the heat of the moment are often the most scathing, but are sometimes the most truthful.
2355648 I'm hoping for this as well, Martinfly wasn't an insane diseased mutant.