Button Mash ran away from home and after a near death experience ends up in a universe beyond imagination.
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Nice update, looking forward to the next one.
This is now one of my new favorites on this site.
Great work, can't wait to read more.
Hiya! Fan of the fic, like what you're doing, and because of that I'd like to put in my two rem. I notice that there are a lot of times where Button thinks something, and then immediately speaks those same thoughts back aloud- which makes sense, given our point of view is essentially through Button's mind and eyes. However, it's just a little repetitive, and I personally think that it should either be just a thought in Button's mind, or a line he speaks aloud, and not both. That being said, I've never actually written a fic before, so take the advice with a grain of salt if you must. I'm pretty excited for the next chapter though!
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Thanks, also the fact you said Two Rem makes you amazing.
That being said, yeah I know about that but my Co-writer and I sometimes overlook those details. Most of the time I write out the thoughts and sometimes he either edits the line to be vocal or he write out the thoughts as a speaking line. I'm so used to it I rarely notice it.