In an alternate world where Deadpool: the Merc with a Mouth is friends with the Mane Six, the land of Equestria will never be the same. Follow the mercenary's adventures, where comedy, action, and absolute chaos ensue.
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I'm kinda pissed that you let Deadpool both get out into a bubble with the rest of Twilight's friends and that you made him useless in the final fight. What, did he run out of nut shots? He could have thrown a rock and nailed Tirek in his genitals. Instead, he just stands there like a dumbass and does jack-shit. What I'm saying is that due to these severely lame prospects, and although I love this story overall, I absolutely hate this chapter.
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Thank you for taking the time to write your comment. Honest feedback influences great writing, and I respect your opinion. I will be sure to keep your thoughts in mind when writing future chapters for this story.
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You are welcome, and thank you for taking my feedback into consideration. Don't get me wrong, the story as a whole is amazing. It's just this chapter that bugs me.
Amazing job working Deadpool into Twilight's Kingdom. That was masterfully done.
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Thank you for the compliment!