very slow start, hopefully the story starts picking up in the next chapter

Looks like an AI generated photo.

11365506
That it is!
Do you like it?

11364719
It does.
Just curious i thought this was a good speed to set?

11365611
There’s not much to catch a readers attention is the issue. You have a kid being a kid, some mostly unknown background characters, and a journal. We know the direction of the story rn, but we don’t have anything to feel excited for.

11365610
It's okay. I noticed it is because the human looks abnormally tall. I've been playing with mid journey bot on Discord and it gives me Hella freaky results

11365616
E-heh... uhm... I used midjourney... xD

I brought the year subscription

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I like this story and hope it continues.

11492325
It very much is!
And I'm excited to bring you all more!

11492325
Just a heads up, my mates and I just crossed 1500 pages in our google docs document. Thats 786K words. And I am currently in the process of trabsfering and editing that inside the bext chapter, to be released... Soon...tm.