Pinkie Pie left the rock farm one fateful day, only to stumble on a scene nopony should ever be forced to see, a captured stallion about to be killed. She was trapped in a basement under a store in Ponyville until she is forced to love it.
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you should use a grammar software I'm pretty sure that will help... microsoft word has made my fictions pretty good. Or you can get help by finding an editor or proof reader. well, have some faith... and your writing will be good in no time.... it is true when you write a lot you will get better. Then you can always go back to the story and fix when you improve further. I mean I done it... When my writing improved I went back to my older stories and make them more polished.
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Yeah, I use Grammarly and Pro Writers Aid, and they help a lot. I think I just need more practice though, so I don't become over-reliant on them. My writing has gotten better, which I am proud of. My first attempt at this story was trash.
Keep going with the good work!
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Thank you, the support means a lot!