so far i am liking this. though im hoping to see more character development from sunset as she enters the first stage. i hope that our main character will be able to be there for each of the levels and help sunset through them. maybe she could learn that as more and more of her is collected by sunset, she is able to interact with the environment and help sunset out directly by closing doors or forcing an animatronic out of the way and preventing a jumpscare. another thing i would love to see is the ORIGINAL glitch trap still being present, whether it being another entity within our main character's head, or it controlling the other animatronics in each of the levels, forcing sunset to race to get her put all back together.

All hail Glitchtrap.

I Love This story man just love the FN@F Lore to it all.

Dude I didn't know you were a FN@F fan that's awesome dude.

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Yeah like I said in the description I would have done that but I'm not that good of a artist plus do you know how hard it is to take a photo of a hand done sketch and make sure the lines are fully visible? I would have to do a full on colored design to get something like that across. And you actually guessed what I planned from the start in regards to my version of glitchtrap helping sunset. As for the original glitchtrap well he won't show up until the Freddy Fazbear virtual experience is actually developed in the equestria girls world meaning after the pizzaria simulator location burns down. The version of the game sunset is playing was generated when marrie was displaced so she didn't cause issues on arrival. I'm going to be working at the next arc today which means finding the fnaf 1 section minigame phone calls. I got the tapes on a note in ever note so I can just copy paste them for the relevant chapters.
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Never actually played the games but I love how the story needs to be worked to be found. And don't worry sunset will be more developed as a character as we go along.

Lovely story so far, however I feel compelled to ask if any of the (EQG) human analogs will retain their original names or if they'll recieve new ones as appropriate to the roles or defining traits they had in the FN@F series?

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Still retain their original names. After all won't make sense if AFTON robotics was a thing only for the founder to not be named afton. And trust me vanny is going to appear but her relation with this glitchtrap is going to weird out marrie for a bit... Mainly due to mistaken identity with the original glitchtrap. And her yandare tendencies due to glitchtrap's messing with her head. I thought long about where I want this to go all of last week so I got a firm plan. Though when the actual displaced stuff happens like meeting other displaced sunset will have to get used to being dragged along for the ride.