I love this casual sociopathic brutal fun with OCs like this. You're pulling it off very well and I'm satisfied, very hopeful for the rest. <3
Not sure if 'her brother' never actually getting a name adds or takes away from the scene - it's definitely awkwardly absent at a few points, but it's also so existentially degrading~
... Sorry in advance for the downvotes.
While there's definitely room for improvement, it's not terrible. I look forward to more.
I love this casual sociopathic brutal fun with OCs like this. You're pulling it off very well and I'm satisfied, very hopeful for the rest. <3
Not sure if 'her brother' never actually getting a name adds or takes away from the scene - it's definitely awkwardly absent at a few points, but it's also so existentially degrading~
This is great.. can't wait for the other chapters. 🧡