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ScarletRibbon

ScarletRibbon #1 · Mar 26th, 2020 · 2 · · Getting The Cream Filling ·

... Sorry in advance for the downvotes.

While there's definitely room for improvement, it's not terrible. I look forward to more.

Exuno

Exuno #2 · Mar 26th, 2020 · 2 · · Getting The Cream Filling ·

I love this casual sociopathic brutal fun with OCs like this. You're pulling it off very well and I'm satisfied, very hopeful for the rest. <3

Not sure if 'her brother' never actually getting a name adds or takes away from the scene - it's definitely awkwardly absent at a few points, but it's also so existentially degrading~

NeonLights999