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Hello.
I recently found your story, and I can say with confidence that I liked it. Although I'm not a fan of Dark Porn and Rape. I won't lie, sometimes it was excessively cruel.
I can't understand one thing! Your story is called "The Filly Catalog," but why do Colts appear in the plot?
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you know, I've never really thought about that, The Foal Catalogue would have been better as it's a pun on "fall catalogue". ahh well, hindsight is 20/20 :P
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I can answer part of that. Rumble, at least, was definitely not part of the original plan. Based on the character tabs, I think Pip was also a later addition after the story was already started. I think that the original concept was all fillies, then some colts were added in later.
Good to see this back, also, maybe the title should be changed, as Rumble is not a 'Filly'
Also, waiting to see how Luna is going with the training.
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There is also such a filly. Petunia Paleo.
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Sorry, but I'm not changing the title :P I mean no one asked for that when Pipsqueak was added. Plus, it might hurt ppl when they search for filly catalogue and it no longer exists.
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I'm confused, why did you mention her?
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I forgot about Pip... Well, at last Rumble is going to have company
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Let's just imagine for a moment that I accepted the role of "Patron" in your plot. Acting, for me, is one of the ways to develop my imagination and writing skills.
As a "Patron", I would not mind expanding the Catalog of Fillies.
Is this the answer to your question?
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You're trying to ask for a chapter with her. You know you don't have to be cryptic about it :P All I need is a unique idea that's not already been done with another character. In my head the HOW she was aquired is done and unique, but if the sex is the same as a previous chapter, it's not worth it.
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Believe me, there are also quite a few ideas in my head, since I am writing my own story myself. However, I am more inclined to romantic relationships that flow into eroticism. Sometimes it happens quite unexpectedly.
I definitely won't be able to describe the dark part of the plot, in the style of your story, but I'm sure of your imagination. As I said earlier, I approve of your idea, and I am one of those readers who understand that this is just a story, and it does not need to be criticized, but simply accepted as it is.
We know that Petunia Paleo is fond of archaeological excavations. From here you can start developing this idea further.
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Yeah, ain't no romance here. Only twisted relationships and broken hearts. And like I said, already have a story for how she got there in my head. but if the sex is generic, it's not worth the effort. However, if you're looking for something sweet and slightly romantic with her, Highly recommend you check out my story Getting Dirty On A Dig Site. I think you'll find what you're looking for.
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Yes, I've seen this story, but I haven't read it. However, I'm not looking for something romantic with this filly. Because I will write this part of the plot myself. I don't expect romance from your story, I'm just telling you that I'm more of a follower of this style. In your story, I want to see exactly your style.
I think I'm starting to understand your problem. Have you run out of fantasies to realize sex scenes? This can be understood, but it is still possible to come up with something unusual. For example, in this Catalog, there are fillies who resist, and there are those who treat it normally. Well, there's also Cozy Glow, who frankly enjoys it.
If we take into account a more canonical approach, then I think that Petunia Paleo is likely to be the second option. And moreover, she will want friendship and perhaps a loving relationship, in return you get gentle and high-quality sex from an inexperienced filly. But over time, her experience gets bigger.
A visit to this filly may become a kind of new option in the Catalog of Fillies. For example, she can be just as dominant, but do it more gently, unlike Cozy Glow. I am sure that in your story, there may be not only a "Whip", but also a "Carrot".
Should I continue to develop this idea further?
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I dunno. For now I think I'd rather shelf this idea for another time, as I've got 4 other stories planned. One of which involves her already and I'd rather try to narrow my focus then get lost again.
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Of course, this is your right. Besides, I'm not forcing my idea on you. However, I have always believed that this is actually a problem when an Author tries to work on multiple projects, instead of focusing on one project.
Any release date in mind for the next chapter/arc?
hello, are you still active?
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On and off alot, Right now? ON! Expect update soon ;)
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Yay, I wish I could see more about Luna, maybe she'll pretend to Celestia that she's successfully 'trained' so they stop torturing her.
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Well in my head I've got plans for her, but that requires me to pull a hard mode and get the story ready for it's ending. XD and it does have one, but requires me to decide on the problem I'm having. Make a Sequel to this story (So I can keep this unfinished and constant, making the shorts) or just bring this story to a close and move on.
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Oh, I'll be looking forward to that page