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Can I say that I like this story way better than the story this is a prequel to? Like what happened to Twilight wasn't very good writing and the original story well wasn't that well written in my opinion. This story though is much better written and seems better planned.
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Thank you, I'm glad that you've been enjoying the story! I'd say that's a fair assessment, too. Looking back on Sins Never Die there's a lot of poor pacing and chapters that should've been longer, and some key events that didn't play out very well. If I were to write that story today, it'd be quite different.
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Yeah this story seems like you planned it out. Yeah, Sins Never died should have ended with Equestria being glassed since the Covenant always won the space battles which were the battles that truly mattered.
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I might actually agree with that. It would've fit the theme of Celestia's past sins having doomed her planet, even a thousand years after she committed them(and because it's a monumental stretch that even a specially-modified destroyer could've stood up to a Covenant battlecruiser).
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Even better would have been for Celestia, Luna and the Mane 6 b able to escape with the UNSC only to see their world be glassed making Celestia realize that she should have killed her opponent in a fair battle.
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Honestly that part wouldn't have made much of a difference either way. The dragons still would've split away from the Equestians in SND because of the perceived unfairness of their loss to the humans, and because the Sangheili had returned. Celestia only revealed the truth about De'mah to Twilight and Luna anyway. Celestia would've had to actually have faced her opponent in fair combat with dragons to bear witness to prevent them from continuing to worship De'mah, which would've prevented them from splitting away to join the Covenant in SND. They might've stayed neutral, but easily could've been persuaded to come back to the Equestrians once they realized the full threat of the Covenant.