Canterlot has fallen. Equestria is lost. Regions were burned. Ponies were slaughtered and enslaved. Hopefully, Princess Twilight's decision will not hasten their doom.
Alright, so far so good. I have noticed a few spelling errors:
“Please wait… contract has been created, thank you for buying or services,”
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Also, be careful when introducing such powerful characters. You might make the conflict too stale on accident so add perhaps some problems similar to what One Punch Man has. That may include loneliness or depression from being too powerful.
Alright, so far so good. I have noticed a few spelling errors:
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Also, be careful when introducing such powerful characters. You might make the conflict too stale on accident so add perhaps some problems similar to what One Punch Man has. That may include loneliness or depression from being too powerful.
I support this so far. Keep it up!