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At the moment, it seems like a good story, leaving aside grammar because I am not good at it, but I have a question: in the celestial canon he hid his relationship with NM, but the guards recognized the brother of heavenly, so, in this AU celestia Didn't he hide his story or just tell a select group?
A select few knew of him due to their ancestors fighting beside him though I will be explained in the next chapter
Honestly, the grammar makes it a little confusing. Also, did you put an equestria girl tag because they look like their human counterparts?
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Yeah though at the time i was thinking of adding the Equestria girls universe in this story but now I am doing something else but will still mention Sunset shimmer
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Is that why you have the equestria girls tag?
10484141
Yeah though its not only her but others as this is my take on the mlp story
10484267
So, they are basically anthro, minus the snouts and hooves?
10484310
Yeah I wanted to combine the design of equestria girls and anthro in this story
10484459
Oh
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The Frank story has every pony as anthropomorphic equines
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While these are a combination of equestria girls and anthro.
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Yup
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Ok, I think I get it a little bit, but some of the grammar makes it complicated.
10484965
Yeah keep in mind this is my first attempt at a story same for the Frank story
10484979
Oh ok
10485024
Yeah but I will make an effort to improve
10485222
Ok
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But what do you think so far?
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It’s very interesting.
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Hopefully I will post more once I post a few for frank also the art cover is my design
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Oh Ok