Neat world building, a decently unique environment and a really strange faction. I have two questions though, what happened to the mare from the prologue? And what is Red's SPECIAL score now?
10021240 Yew? When her mom heard gunfire, she grabbed the kids and fled. The family planned that anybody on guard would try to protect the house and buy enough time for everyone else to get away.
S - 10 P - 6 E - 10 C - 4 I - 6 A - 3 L - 2
He used to be a smart sneaky boy. Not as much anymore.
"The raider grinned, enjoying my weak attempts to stay alive, and pointed to the wagon. I walked there, hopped inside, and found the box of manacles. One of the other raiders, a mare with bulging neck muscles, clamped the manacles onto my hooves and locked them tight against my fear taught muscles."
This part in the prologue, I read it as if they already had one captive and was hoping she would be the first companion.
These raiders are a strange bunch of characters. That and the main character seems oddly calm about everything, almost as if this were routine. I'm still inclined toward the tone.
Neat world building, a decently unique environment and a really strange faction. I have two questions though, what happened to the mare from the prologue? And what is Red's SPECIAL score now?
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Yew?
When her mom heard gunfire, she grabbed the kids and fled.
The family planned that anybody on guard would try to protect the house and buy enough time for everyone else to get away.
S - 10
P - 6
E - 10
C - 4
I - 6
A - 3
L - 2
He used to be a smart sneaky boy.
Not as much anymore.
Oh, I realize now that I misread it.
"The raider grinned, enjoying my weak attempts to stay alive, and pointed to the wagon. I walked there, hopped inside, and found the box of manacles. One of the other raiders, a mare with bulging neck muscles, clamped the manacles onto my hooves and locked them tight against my fear taught muscles."
This part in the prologue, I read it as if they already had one captive and was hoping she would be the first companion.
My mistake.
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Yeah, he's not that lucky.
These raiders are a strange bunch of characters. That and the main character seems oddly calm about everything, almost as if this were routine. I'm still inclined toward the tone.