A story based on Twin foals finding out they both exist to each other.
I have to agree with Jessie.
No mother would let her child be taken, she'd fight for custody and or arrangements with the child.
Simply forgetting your child is borderline cruel.
The pacing is a tad clunky.
Also I spotted a few mistakes.
But I had fun reading this chapter.
Though I enjoyed Jessie.
I kind of don't like Faith, merely for the fact she's not more passionate about reclaiming her child.
She seemed to show more passion about defending her Title, rather than her child.
But mayhaps she's just emotionally abused , I know how a relationship can dig deep into a woman's soul.
I need to read more.
Good job though.
9799137Thank you so much for reading. I read your comments on how the friends are your favorite. Faith comes around to Jessie's suggestion, though that is much more later in the story.
-Keep it Safe & Keep it Real
-See you when I see you 👀
-Faith Heart ❤
I have to agree with Jessie.
No mother would let her child be taken, she'd fight for custody and or arrangements with the child.
Simply forgetting your child is borderline cruel.
The pacing is a tad clunky.
Also I spotted a few mistakes.
But I had fun reading this chapter.
Though I enjoyed Jessie.
I kind of don't like Faith, merely for the fact she's not more passionate about reclaiming her child.
She seemed to show more passion about defending her Title, rather than her child.
But mayhaps she's just emotionally abused , I know how a relationship can dig deep into a woman's soul.
I need to read more.
Good job though.
9799137
Thank you so much for reading. I read your comments on how the friends are your favorite. Faith comes around to Jessie's suggestion, though that is much more later in the story.
-Keep it Safe & Keep it Real
-See you when I see you 👀
-Faith Heart ❤