Trixie gets the one thing she always desired, besides attention. The chance to meet and get to really know her idol, Jack Pot.
Man I’m really loving this, kind of hope neither of them figure out about the other in the end.
This is insane. What a fantastic job the buikdup the dialoges everything seems to work together to get to the point what everyone waits. Woukd recommend cant wait for next one.
Nice chapter, but spotted a couple things you may want to edit.
"Would you do me the honor of acoompanying me for an aftershow lunch date, Ms. Trixie? I feel you deserve it."
That should be "accompanying"
While Jack Pot escorted her to the lunch spot of her choice, Trixie lightly batted his tail hers.
Ans I think a word's missing there.
9706646 Fixed. Thank you for pointing those out.
Oh, Trixie. How true is that statement?!
Great job! Keep going!
Man I’m really loving this, kind of hope neither of them figure out about the other in the end.
This is insane. What a fantastic job the buikdup the dialoges everything seems to work together to get to the point what everyone waits. Woukd recommend cant wait for next one.
Nice chapter, but spotted a couple things you may want to edit.
That should be "accompanying"
Ans I think a word's missing there.
9706646 Fixed. Thank you for pointing those out.
Oh, Trixie. How true is that statement?!
Great job! Keep going!![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)