I ended up in Equestria because some random magic anomaly swept me away. Now I have to deal with these emotional ponies. I keep telling them that my past doesn't matter and that feelings are irrelevant but they keep trying to "help me".
Pretty decent. But all's the same its like a skeleton frame of a story. Perception is skewered a bit and extended details and the like would help making it sound like a story, right now its kind of like a 'report'.
Pretty decent. But all's the same its like a skeleton frame of a story. Perception is skewered a bit and extended details and the like would help making it sound like a story, right now its kind of like a 'report'.
Correction: i'll should be I'll