The first chapter went fine, I listened to the song and I'm eager to read what you do with it :D
Second chapter was good, didn't seem rushed to me really. Not much plot wise, but hey it's the first real chapter of the story. I don't know what else to say other than can't wait for the next chapter :D
If this seems rushed I'm sorry, I hope I didn't go to fast
you went fine
The first chapter went fine, I listened to the song and I'm eager to read what you do with it :D
Second chapter was good, didn't seem rushed to me really. Not much plot wise, but hey it's the first real chapter of the story. I don't know what else to say other than can't wait for the next chapter :D
Have a good one.
Tracking
*bro hoof*
I was just thinking about doing something like this! Oh well, you're doing fine.
You guys sure this is ok? Something feels off as I right this, it doesn't seem...up to PAR, I don't know
shut up about your stuff being rushed. its too awesome for anypony to notice, am i right, guys?
moustache: x infinity /5
for everything i have read of yours.
BTW: brohoof! "/)*(\" (even though im a girl)