You are hereby authorized to receive information regarding Equestria Harmony Act Section Three. You are not permitted to speak of Section Three, failure to comply will result in being Erased.
There's a few capitalization errors, but other than that this was good! The premise seemed interesting and pretty dark, reminds me a bit of a story I've had in the works for a while. Nice job!
I am intrigued. I do wish to see more of what you have in mind. There isnt a lot here to critique. I get the sense that you are keeping things specificly vague. So I can’t give advice yet.
SCP Foundation maybe?
There's a few capitalization errors, but other than that this was good! The premise seemed interesting and pretty dark, reminds me a bit of a story I've had in the works for a while. Nice job!
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if you can highlight those it would be great.
also, Section Three (and the other two too) are supposed to be capitalized.
I am intrigued. I do wish to see more of what you have in mind. There isnt a lot here to critique. I get the sense that you are keeping things specificly vague. So I can’t give advice yet.
damn this is pretty interesting