A humans that thinks he's a monster in their eyes, and ponies that find him absolutely adorable.
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I admit, I'm skimming, but I'll say that chapter 6 has tons of perspective and tense shifting for some reason? But it looks like you mostly stopped doing that in chapter 7, so that's a definite improvement.
I do hope you keep up with it.
10287354My mind is a fuckin mess and I usually get less than 6 hours of sleep over 48 hours.
"Gods I hope that Dipper is the weirdest thing that I have to deal with today." Unfortunately for Ash, it wasn't.
Stop tempting Murphy! When will the oc ever learn.
10288387Like a zombie it rises from its tomb
10287595Never~!!!
10287306
I admit, I'm skimming, but I'll say that chapter 6 has tons of perspective and tense shifting for some reason? But it looks like you mostly stopped doing that in chapter 7, so that's a definite improvement.
I do hope you keep up with it.
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My mind is a fuckin mess and I usually get less than 6 hours of sleep over 48 hours.
Stop tempting Murphy! When will the oc ever learn.
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Like a zombie it rises from its tomb
10287595
Never~!!!