I'm intrigued so far, but the perspective suddenly changed. It started off being written in third person, but now it's written in first person? It would be best to be consistent with the perspective. It was quite jarring to go from third person to first person.
I'm intrigued so far, but the perspective suddenly changed. It started off being written in third person, but now it's written in first person? It would be best to be consistent with the perspective. It was quite jarring to go from third person to first person.
Well, well, well.
What?
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Yeah, I still need to go back and edit the first few chapters. Im hoping that my writing is considered better at the 6 or 7th chapters