It's odd to me. I mean, good story. I'm not gay, but mlp homosexuality of both kinds facinates me to a degree. It's kind of cute in a way, those that I have read.
This was a fun story, but there are quite a few writing mistakes (and I can see this has been pointed out before). Maybe you could find someone to look over your stories in The Proofreader Group. (Full disclosure: I'm a member of the group but I haven't had time to help with any fics.)
It's odd to me. I mean, good story.
I'm not gay, but mlp homosexuality of both kinds facinates me to a degree. It's kind of cute in a way, those that I have read.
Somehow you left open for continuation (guessing).
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I actually am thinking about another story about this. Same universe and everything.
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Actually writing another of the same type of ship
This was a fun story, but there are quite a few writing mistakes (and I can see this has been pointed out before). Maybe you could find someone to look over your stories in The Proofreader Group. (Full disclosure: I'm a member of the group but I haven't had time to help with any fics.)
Can't wait for the new one.