Ayyyy man nice job. Other than a few typos, it's fine. Not you're best imo tho. The character telling us stories of his travels along with his heritage was cool even tho half way it felt like I was jumping from random scenario to random scenario. Still good tho
Ayyyy man nice job. Other than a few typos, it's fine. Not you're best imo tho. The character telling us stories of his travels along with his heritage was cool even tho half way it felt like I was jumping from random scenario to random scenario. Still good tho