Off to a great start.

A story is a story... but letting people suggest isn't going to be the best thing. Also this fiction is 5/10... missed spell words, punctuations, and capitalizations errors.

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To be honest, the suggestion is because I don't want the stereotypical type of hypnosis such as the classic "look into my eyes", swirly eyes or the use of a pendulum.

How's chapter two coming?

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Bit of a block at the mo as I want to figure out how she's gonna find out that she can hypnotise the others let alone make a way that doesn't feel like the typical swirly eyes or pendulum.

That and I lost my cat halfway through November so that's gotten me a bit down in the dumps.

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Maybe she waves her finger in front of their face before saying something?

And oof, that sucks.

10565215
The finger gave me an idea, Maybe she can boop their nose and probably say something like "Boop da whoop".

10565230
Pfft, silly but it works

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Well the idea I just had was Rainbow and Applejack getting into a silly disagreement and Rainbow boops her on the nose in a way to try and get Applejack to stop for a second so she can speak, or maybe Rainbow winds her up at the start and boops her as a joke.

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I like the first one

10565330
Hopefully, I should get a start at some point, before my cat passed away I had written a few other fics. Some unreleased ones on here and a few that I've done on Archive of our own where I've either been able to do stories that this site won't allow or branch out with different franchises.

My latest one is on Digimon but it's hard trying to find a site to rewatch certain episodes for parts of the story.

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Alright