its the beeeest niiiiiight eeeveeeeeeeeer! (thumbs up if you get the reference) but seriously this story got way better now that sandbar openly confessed his love for Gallus to their friends... now we just need a public marriage proposal and wedding at twilight's castle... with ocellus taking place of twilight as the minister
read this chapter several hours ago/last night. my favorite part is the opening scene where gallus slams the door, impulsively making out with sandbar like two horny teenagers!
9244717 I think its obvious that the ways this could go are getting caught by one or multiple of their professors while having sex followed by praise or scorn, getting caught having sex by their friends followed by praise (given that they already came out to their friends as gay), they come out as gay to the teachers, the teachers figure it out on their own or through rumors, they get married.... any one of those paths still leads to more sex
9246153 actually the book sandbar read in the first few chapters described griffon courtship... we already saw sandbar do his equivalent of the exchanging crest feathers, the book said that marriage occurred a few months afterwards so I believe the chapter honesty was indeed sandbar essentially asking gallus to marry him
9260159 I had really hoped to have something this last weekend, but I was under the weather and the draft revisions weren't cooperating. I'm hoping to have at least one more chapter by this weekend.
9260759 I hope you feel better... Also since sandbar proposed to gallus in the chapter honesty (and he accepted) are we going to see a wedding anytime soon? I hope these two lovers get married... I guess that would mean that during holiday breaks gallus wouldnt have to go back "home" to griffonstone because im sure sandbar's family would welcome gallus as a new family member(horray for gallus finally having a real family!)
I'm just getting back to this after reading the first chapter when it first came out, and I love the mix of sex and cute emotions. Awesome job! I'll look forward to the next chapter.
9272038 9282329 Thank you for the enthusiasm--it's greatly appreciated. I'm still struggling with the editing on the next chapter, but I think I can realistically say at least one chapter should publish this week. Hope you like it!
9288224 Of course i love it! Gallbar is my #1 favorite ship for a number of reasons #1 the characters are adorable, #2 gay ships are underrated, #3 INTERSPECIES ships are awesome, #4 gallbar just works somehow, and the reason i hold gallbar so close to my heart #5 gallbar shipping led me to discover i am bisexual(i used to think i was straight untill gallbar was a thing) thank you so much to the mlp community as a whole... I actually make art on derpibooru under the artist name Ma3a and i have actually made a few gallbar pics(most of them explicit) in SFM
I always look forward to seeing a new chapter of this released, to be honest... and this one doesn't disappoint. :-) Nicely done.
its the beeeest niiiiiight eeeveeeeeeeeer! (thumbs up if you get the reference) but seriously this story got way better now that sandbar openly confessed his love for Gallus to their friends... now we just need a public marriage proposal and wedding at twilight's castle... with ocellus taking place of twilight as the minister
this was really good
read this chapter several hours ago/last night. my favorite part is the opening scene where gallus slams the door, impulsively making out with sandbar like two horny teenagers!
Alright, where could this story go from here. I'm intrigued.
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I think its obvious that the ways this could go are getting caught by one or multiple of their professors while having sex followed by praise or scorn, getting caught having sex by their friends followed by praise (given that they already came out to their friends as gay), they come out as gay to the teachers, the teachers figure it out on their own or through rumors, they get married.... any one of those paths still leads to more sex
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True. I think it would be too early for marriage.
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actually the book sandbar read in the first few chapters described griffon courtship... we already saw sandbar do his equivalent of the exchanging crest feathers, the book said that marriage occurred a few months afterwards so I believe the chapter honesty was indeed sandbar essentially asking gallus to marry him
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Oh yeah. Forgot about that.
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given that sandbar proposed to gallus I think we can expect a marriage in the next 5 chapters.... I CANT WAIT!!
when do you think we will get new chapters?
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I had really hoped to have something this last weekend, but I was under the weather and the draft revisions weren't cooperating. I'm hoping to have at least one more chapter by this weekend.
9260759
I hope you feel better... Also since sandbar proposed to gallus in the chapter honesty (and he accepted) are we going to see a wedding anytime soon? I hope these two lovers get married... I guess that would mean that during holiday breaks gallus wouldnt have to go back "home" to griffonstone because im sure sandbar's family would welcome gallus as a new family member(horray for gallus finally having a real family!)
I'm just getting back to this after reading the first chapter when it first came out, and I love the mix of sex and cute emotions. Awesome job! I'll look forward to the next chapter.
cant wait for more chapters with this adorable couple!
This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It's cute, it's hot, and I love the slow, gradual build of their relationship. Awesome work.
I know I posted a comment of similar content before but when can we expect a few new chapters? I absolutely love this story and want to see more
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Thank you for the enthusiasm--it's greatly appreciated. I'm still struggling with the editing on the next chapter, but I think I can realistically say at least one chapter should publish this week. Hope you like it!
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Of course i love it! Gallbar is my #1 favorite ship for a number of reasons #1 the characters are adorable, #2 gay ships are underrated, #3 INTERSPECIES ships are awesome, #4 gallbar just works somehow, and the reason i hold gallbar so close to my heart #5 gallbar shipping led me to discover i am bisexual(i used to think i was straight untill gallbar was a thing) thank you so much to the mlp community as a whole... I actually make art on derpibooru under the artist name Ma3a and i have actually made a few gallbar pics(most of them explicit) in SFM
Anal is the best way to end the day.