Our seamstresses don't leave any typos in the stitches so you can look your absolute best.

🎵 Make her something perfect to inspire
Even though she hates formal attire
Gotta mind those intimate details
Even though she's more concerned with sales 🎵

Trixie lulamoon

cap the L

Your new

You're

throw out her hoove wide

hooves

The Don's words was enough to send one of his minion's advancing

words were, minions (no apostrophe)

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Shameful typos... They're not allowed in Rarity's fine establishment!

Really enjoyed this chapter.
There were too many things I liked so here's a few quick highlights:

Yeah, yeah, give me time with my new mare." He threw a leg over Trixie's withers, pulling her towards the exit. "We have plenty to discuss."

Well he's certainly the charmer Wonder if this will come back to bite him some day :P

"Have a nice day," bid Gudrun without looking up from her work.

and with that I guess we're saying goodbye to Gudrun and Fetlock, at least for now :o wonder if they'll pop back up later in the story.

Trixie held her food in her magic as she hurried to catch up, sneaking another bite to let to flavor explode in her mouth.

Trixie can already use her horn? didn't see that coming

We'll see, but I treat my mares right."

again, feel he's tempting karma

Shaking herself into focus, Trixie opened the door with her magic, a honk sounding from above.

And this is whats got me really looking forward to the next chapter. Really wondering who;s going to be working in the store. Did Rarity really keep all three of those ponies Rainbow hired? (talk about sudden budget inflation ) Is Vinyl still working her club in the store with rarity? Spoon pony .
and also, ooooo is Rarity going to be there? Didnt expect we'd run into the mane 6 in this one

ok... I'm done gushing now.....

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There is an advantage to taking on the role of an existing magically-able pony. All he has to do is give up what he is in order to have it all, at least the Trixie package.