This starts out with flashbacks... You've been warned.

Enough of the fucking flashbacks dude. This one was well enough deserved but shit, find a more creative way to introduce a concept into the story.

Red Rose smiles. "No, I jus- wait.. You really think I'm beautiful?" She asks.

This is bullshit. This man is from a time of massive intolerance. The fact that he just jumps to the idea of finding ponies attractive means that he had some kind of prior attractiveness to horses. Making him a nasty horsefucker.