My Little Pony Friendship is Magic: Cheesecake

by Master Cheese Cake

The Newcomer Part 1

My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic Episode 1: Newcomer Part 1

It was cloudy night in Ponyville, it was so cloudy in fact that it started to rain and that rain was wet. Fluttershy was in her house checking the animals were safely inside and tucked away. Then all of a sudden a knock on her front door and she quickly runs to the door to open it for the poor soul in the pouring rain.

The second the door opens she sees a pony that was completely odd in every way, he had a cape and a top hat plus he had an odd design on his fur, which are puzzle pieces of green and blue.

“Uh, hi,” Fluttershy greets.

The stranger didn’t say anything only walks closer to Fluttershy, scaring her. She backs up from the stranger.

“What are you doing?”

He moves closer.

“Please sir I don’t want any trouble.”

Then he reaches into his cape and that was when Fluttershy screams for her life as he pulls out a toaster.

“Hi, I’m Cheese Cake.”

“What do you want?”

“Well I just moved here and well it started to rain. I would have made it into town tonight but because of the rain I can’t, so I found this house and decided to ask permission to stay for the night until I can get to town tomorrow. The mayor told me to give a toaster to someone who lived here oooor was it a rose that I was suppose to bring.”

“Oh all you had to do was say so.”

“Yeah sorry I’m working on a new way to enter my play.”

“Here let me set up the guest bed.”

The Next Day…

Fluttershy wakes up to see if Cheese Cake had waked up yet. The second she walks in the bedroom she finds that he was gone, but had left his cape and top hat. She quickly takes it in her mouth and flies toward town to return his items. On her way to the town hall she was met by Rainbow Dash also heading to town.

“Hey Fluttershy, cool cape can I try it on.”

She lands in front of the town hall and drops the clothing on the ground.

“These aren’t mine Rainbow Dash. They’re for a guy I met…”

“Oh my ponies Fluttershy, who’s the lucky guy that you’re giving this to?”

“No it’s not like that…”

“Don’t worry Fluttershy I won’t tell anyone. I have to go, but you have to introduce me to this guy. *wink*”

Rainbow Dash flies away fast to complete her task of the day.

“It’s not like… that… huh.”

“What’s not like that… uuuh… I never got your name from last night,” Cheese Cake asks.

“Oh it’s um Fluttershy.”

“Fluttershy, do you want to help me set up my house?”

“Uh sure, oh and here’s your cape and hat.”

“Fluttershy I left it there as a gift for you. I mean you let me stay at your house when it was raining.”

“Oh thank you, but I can’t accept this.”

“Well if you say so.”

He picks up his cape and top hat, “Let go set up my house.”

They walk to the edge of town and they find a huge box.

“Fluttershy if you’d please tap the box five times and step back as fast as you can.”

She does as he instructs and the boxes walls fall and starts to unfold into a house. Finally the last piece unfolds and a sign
with a picture of a cheesecake on the front.

“Wow.”

“I know right all it took was five minutes.”

“How did you do it?”

“I used magic.”

“Uh, but you’re not a unicorn.”

“True nor am I a pegasus pony I am a regular Earth pony that invents things… uh things that well do things. Anyway I search the ends of Equestria to create things that help out modern day life. Oh and I make the finest cheesecake in Equestria.”

“Oooooh…”

“What?”

“Well Mr. and Mrs. Cake make the cakes around here. I just hope there won’t be a rivalry between you two.”

“No, worries Fluttershy there shall be no competition as long as I live...”

Then Fluttershy notices a bush slowly moving behind Cheese Cake while he makes his speech. Then Pinkie Pie pops her head out and observes Cheese Cake very carefully. Then she moves off to the side.

“Come now I will give you a tour.”

Cheese Cake move inside as Fluttershy follows she is intercepted by Pinkie Pie.

“Fluttershy I can’t believe you.”

“What did I do?”

“I can’t believe you didn’t tell me about your boyfriend. I mean seriously we’re like best friends and Rainbow Dash was the
one to tell me this news.”

“Well I n…”

“There is no excuse for not telling me and I tell you everything that I do like right now, I’m spying on the competition for the best pastries in Ponyville.”

“Well he does…”

“Huuuuuuh, I just had an idea you should spy on him for me and tell me what he has. Thank you so much for doing this. He’s coming back.”

Pinkie Pie races out of there and back to Sugarcube Corner.

“Ah, I see you admiring the sign and I know why. It’s because it took me the longest to make from the other parts of the
house.”

“How long did it take to make that?”

“Five minutes and the house took two minutes. Now let’s continue the tour.”

Pinkie returns and pops her head out. She waves her hooves in the air, does serious face and then stretches her mouth
waving her head back and forth letting her tongue flail out of her mouth.

“What?”

“Remember spy on him.”

“That’s what that met.”

“No that was stretching of the day, now go.”

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I have this on Fanfiction too, but my friend told me about his site, so I am posting here too or reposting.

Comments

[-Brutus]

I feel this story is progressing too quickly, slow down more and explain his past. Why did he come to ponyville, and everything.