What if you tried to kill yourself, but the world decided to give you another chance in another world? A world where skin isn't an issue, but supernatural phenomenon are?!
I parked my motorcycle in onr of the parking spots before turning it off. onr should be one
She held put her hand in front of her, "nice to meet ya'!" put should be out
I immediately snap put of my trance, and chuckle nervously, "Uh, yeah, nice to meet you Rainbow. My name is Orion Redheart. I'm new to this school. It's my first day." put should be out
other than the mistakes I pointed out well done looking forward to more
8781029 Yeah, most parts of each chapter are done on my phone, and since "O" and "P" are so close together, and my phone keyboard is small; I ultimately end up making out put. And when I proofread my chapters, I always overlook it, but I'm glad you enjoy it. I'll be sure to prevent those previous mistakes in the next chapters
I parked my motorcycle in onr of the parking spots before turning it off.
onr should be one
She held put her hand in front of her, "nice to meet ya'!"
put should be out
I immediately snap put of my trance, and chuckle nervously, "Uh, yeah, nice to meet you Rainbow. My name is Orion Redheart. I'm new to this school. It's my first day."
put should be out
other than the mistakes I pointed out well done looking forward to more
8781029
Yeah, most parts of each chapter are done on my phone, and since "O" and "P" are so close together, and my phone keyboard is small; I ultimately end up making out put. And when I proofread my chapters, I always overlook it, but I'm glad you enjoy it. I'll be sure to prevent those previous mistakes in the next chapters
8781056
no problem it is a lovely story and i really look forward to more
8781058
I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoy it! I plan to upload more chapters as much as I can!
8781685
and i look forward to it