The Origin of Magic, Marks, and Harmony. The beginning of the Pre-Equestrian Age. Will you be remembered by the ponies to come? Who will follow in your hoofprints?
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Now this spear business is another one that could use some revision. It is unlikely that the stallions would accept it without seeing it actually being useful, and attaching a stone to the end of a stick well enough to use as a tool is actually pretty hard. Replace stone with sharpened wood, and foreshadow it as being used to poke at a nearly ripe fruit just out of reach in a tree. Show that the adults are not useless and have been affected by the light as well; have somepony come up with a 3 shift system for stallions on watch.
Baskets could be of use here. let some ponies out with a stallion escort to gather food into baskets. Then they can last longer.
Also, when will ponies learn flintknapping?