When a new boy named Astral Shadow arrives at Canterlot High, he has trouble making friends, but quickly opens up to a group of girls. But when an old rival from his past returns, how far will he go to protect them?
well certainly better than the first chapter i'll give you that, i'll keep reading, but there's something about this that's annoying or something and i can't really place my finger on it. i'd say the cape but i love capes to so that ain't it
8415241 no those i have always found funny and just hilarious. IDK it might be his character? idk what is honestly bothering me about the story. I'll keep reading but damn if it's not bugging me not knowing that
8415249 Maybe it's just the fact that it's a MLP/Dragon Ball crossover. Somebody did say in the first chapter that Dragon Ball doesn't mix well with MLP
8429769 idk,but like i said i'll keep reading (mainly because you put the shadowbolts in this i can't find that many stories with sugarcoat in romance.)
So awesom.
well certainly better than the first chapter i'll give you that, i'll keep reading, but there's something about this that's annoying or something and i can't really place my finger on it. i'd say the cape but i love capes to so that ain't it
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Maybe it's the forth wall break at the end?
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no those i have always found funny and just hilarious. IDK it might be his character? idk what is honestly bothering me about the story. I'll keep reading but damn if it's not bugging me not knowing that
8415249
Maybe it's just the fact that it's a MLP/Dragon Ball crossover. Somebody did say in the first chapter that Dragon Ball doesn't mix well with MLP
8429769
idk,but like i said i'll keep reading (mainly because you put the shadowbolts in this i can't find that many stories with sugarcoat in romance.)
Cool keep update it pls