So Perfect, I am glad that Rainbow got released, but let me guess that Doctor is going to be put in her place or maybe that guard that branded her with the number 15, once her fur grows back along with her name and tail she will look like the old Rainbow Dash then.
Yeah my bad, I skimmed through the bottom part and missed what happened tot he guard and doctor, so what about the other prisoners in there, were they all taken out and sent to other places then to finish their time?
Sweet, I can't wait to read the next chapter, of course did Dash finally get to have an orgasm after she was released from that catsuit because it was over 40,000 denied orgasms, she should have gotten to orgasm finally after being on the edge for 15 years.
I've seen other stories that get sequels to them by other authors before and those author's never got permission to make their own version of a sequel for the original story, so this one is MUCH better so far then the prequel.
Gotta be honest, I'm questioning the inclusion of cars. I mean, I'm not against cars in general in ponyfics, but when you flat out say "And now they're driving a specific Earth Model Car" it kind draws me out of the story.
So Perfect, I am glad that Rainbow got released, but let me guess that Doctor is going to be put in her place or maybe that guard that branded her with the number 15, once her fur grows back along with her name and tail she will look like the old Rainbow Dash then.
8253565
Read through it again more carefully. It shows what happens to those two
8253740
Yeah my bad, I skimmed through the bottom part and missed what happened tot he guard and doctor, so what about the other prisoners in there, were they all taken out and sent to other places then to finish their time?
8253763
I'll clarify things next chapter.
8253778
Sweet, I can't wait to read the next chapter, of course did Dash finally get to have an orgasm after she was released from that catsuit because it was over 40,000 denied orgasms, she should have gotten to orgasm finally after being on the edge for 15 years.
8254162
15......more like 17 years. This takes place two years after the epilogue of Dash's Imprisonment
Did you get permission to make a sequel? Because if not I feel hijacking was exactly what the original story deserved.
8254420
I didn't ask. The story deserved no credit
8254420
I've seen other stories that get sequels to them by other authors before and those author's never got permission to make their own version of a sequel for the original story, so this one is MUCH better so far then the prequel.
Gotta be honest, I'm questioning the inclusion of cars. I mean, I'm not against cars in general in ponyfics, but when you flat out say "And now they're driving a specific Earth Model Car" it kind draws me out of the story.
8259978
It's anthro so yeah. Plus the prequel had one