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So Perfect, I am glad that Rainbow got released, but let me guess that Doctor is going to be put in her place or maybe that guard that branded her with the number 15, once her fur grows back along with her name and tail she will look like the old Rainbow Dash then.
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Read through it again more carefully. It shows what happens to those two
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Yeah my bad, I skimmed through the bottom part and missed what happened tot he guard and doctor, so what about the other prisoners in there, were they all taken out and sent to other places then to finish their time?
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I'll clarify things next chapter.
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Sweet, I can't wait to read the next chapter, of course did Dash finally get to have an orgasm after she was released from that catsuit because it was over 40,000 denied orgasms, she should have gotten to orgasm finally after being on the edge for 15 years.
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15......more like 17 years. This takes place two years after the epilogue of Dash's Imprisonment
Did you get permission to make a sequel? Because if not I feel hijacking was exactly what the original story deserved.
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I didn't ask. The story deserved no credit
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I've seen other stories that get sequels to them by other authors before and those author's never got permission to make their own version of a sequel for the original story, so this one is MUCH better so far then the prequel.
"SO AWESOME!"
Great second chapter, I can't wait to see what happens in later chapters to Celestia, I hope she get's what's coming to her for doing that to Dash.
You'll just have to wait. Also thanks for all the ideas for this chapter anf the next one coming
Gotta be honest, I'm questioning the inclusion of cars. I mean, I'm not against cars in general in ponyfics, but when you flat out say "And now they're driving a specific Earth Model Car" it kind draws me out of the story.
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It's anthro so yeah. Plus the prequel had one
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I'm aware of that. There's a difference between "they took her there in a truck" and "He got into his 1985 Jeep Cherokee." Them having trucks is believable. Unless they're on earth, them having brand-name vehicles from another planet is... less so.
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Only can say one thing: deal with it
You are quite welcome "Speedy Silverstreak" I was happy to help with the idea's for your story and will always be happy to lend a hand for story idea's. I can't wait to see the next chapter and the after story chapter too, hope you get it out soon because I just LOVE this story and would love to see another sequel.
More?
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Still writing last chapter
Oh such a sweet chapter and I just LOVE how you have Celestia all suited uplike that and doing other things to her then what was done to Rainbow, I can't wait to see how many years she will be stuck in there, and it's in a prison under Twilight's Castle right?
This was good. Though, I hope you're going to write the squeal involving Rainbow Dash's therapy and recovery like you said you would. That would be awesome.
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I will. It'll be a bit before it comes out
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Awesome!
Sorry my vote was going to either Twilight Sparkle or Sunset Shimmer...
Mostly Sunset Shimmer.