(YOU CAN SKIP THE SEX AND THE STORY WILL STILL MAKE SENSE!!) Soarin and Dash have been married for over a year now and decide to have a foal. Dash's pregnancy is very different than most.
I'm excited for the future of this srory The punctuation in this chapter seems better than the previous, alothough there are still a couple grammatical errors. Other than that, the story has been great!
...but also feeling a warm, soothing feeling start forming deep in her womb. Soarin began grunting and lightly humping as he unloaded his precious load deep into his mare's womb.
Um...if that's the case, he punctured the mucous plug at her cervix, and I don't think that's what you intended.
9050125 No that was not what I intended, thank you so much, I don't know as much as I should about anatomy, I'll fix that mistake when I find the time. Thank you for pointing that out!
I'm excited for the future of this srory The punctuation in this chapter seems better than the previous, alothough there are still a couple grammatical errors. Other than that, the story has been great!
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Thank you for your feedback. I'll fix all the errors later on!
I just hope it doesn't turn out to be sad!!
Um...if that's the case, he punctured the mucous plug at her cervix, and I don't think that's what you intended.
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No that was not what I intended, thank you so much, I don't know as much as I should about anatomy, I'll fix that mistake when I find the time. Thank you for pointing that out!
Why is soarins cock dangling inbetween his legs shouldn’t he have an erection