Fallout: Equestria - To Bellenast

by Sir Mediocre

7. Magus

Chapter Seven

Magus

[Under Construction]

Author's Note:

1 February 2024: Revisions begun!
Comments from before February 2024 may refer to things that I altered significantly or removed entirely during revision.

If there’s anything that catches your attention, whether editorial, continuity-related, or just something that doesn’t feel quite right, let me know. Feedback is blood and I am a mean green mother from outer space! Feed me, Seymour!

Comments

[Starlight Nova]

Why did you make the chapters so long?

[Sir Mediocre]

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Because I don't order 6-inch subs, only foot-long.

I break them up when it makes sense to do so. I realize that's a way to make them balloon into gargantuan (Read: MN7) proportions, but I want certain chunks together.

[Quiznak]

Personally, I like longer chapters. Anyways, love the chapter, though I really dislike the cliffhanger.

[Sir Mediocre]

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I, too, dislike cliffhangers, but I dislike even more a missed opportunity to employ one.

[Quiznak]

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And so the Trollestia shows itself...