I already know there'll be like a hundred downvotes, but most of them will probably be from people that didn't even read the story and downvoted it based on the fetish content in the description. So, I'll take some advice from when I was on the forums and ignore them

Otherwise solid work but ditch this;

She peed for about a minute and 15 seconds

Wayyy too specific.
Was mildly disappointed that Twilight only farted after wetting herself. Still a solid story though.

8066605 You mean, that she didn't fart until after she wet herself, or that she didn't do more than fart?

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That she didn't fart before she wet herself. Inserting any extra fetishes into this story is not necessary even though it is a bit tame for my liking

Also great work on overcoming your anxiety posting fetish stuff, everyone knows the fetish community needs more writers

8066745 Yeah, I thought that might interfere with the whole desperation part of it. But thanks for the positive review!

8066745 I edited it a bit to add in three more fart scenes, two of which come before the wetting.

8066745 Just noticed the "a bit tame for my liking". Comments like those always make me feel better actually cause I often feel my stories are too hardcore with the fetish stuff.

If you want something more extreme, check this story. It's the most extreme fetish story I've ever written, but it got surprisingly decent reviews. If you call it tame - and don't unless you mean it - that means there are more extreme stories out there and I don't have to worry in the slightest anymore.

8070535 well, I enjoyed this one. Specially having Twilight to be the one who held it longer (she's one of my favorites for this, together with Rarity and Fluttershy). I liked how Twilight's desperation got greater and greater throughout the story. Good story!

8092848 I thought Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie were my favorites to fetishize, but I find I enjoy doing Twilight just as much. Sometimes Fluttershy too, once I was able to not feel bad about it

Anyway, thanks for the positive review

That part when Twi bent down and her pants ripped apart reminded me so hard of that one Spongebob episode and Twi should really lay off the beans
Haven't laughed so much in a while XDDD