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I noticed the grammar errors too . Normally I would have stopped reading (since it started from the first chapter) but I told myself to see how long (chapter wise) it’ll take until they get better. I think the last 2 to 5 chapters ( maybe a few more) were getting slightly better.
Yeah, I think getting an editor would greatly help your writing on this one. I’ve read other that have worse grammar but this one is much better and readable.
Otherwise, this is a great read. Awesome story line and I’m hoping to see what happens with both Twilights in this. I really hope you continue this. Don’t feel bad. This is really good. Keep it up.