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I asked him, he felt that it'd be too much work for him to tackle. I'd need to find another artist to do it instead, and I don't really feel like dealing with that.
This particular ficlet seems criminally feedback-impoverished for something that hits me in so many fave-spots simultaneously-thanks for sharing. Though the 'greed=mate preparation' thing seems a skosh contrived, about all I found myself itching for was (a) one more dracopone in Squiggley's oven and (b) a paragraph or two of maddeningly silky, button-stroking striptease. That noted, two typos: 'his dick' gets repeated in paragraph #11, and 'incredibly' as opposed to 'incredible' in #14.
EDIT: Welp, talk about getting what you itch for with interest. Hadn't expected Rarity's prodigiously updated foal count, and ditto for the fantastic Patch pic which prompted it. Gotta love the pregpone connection(s).