After a bit of Universal mumbo-jumbo the Angel Of Death finds himself in Equestria. Can he make a new life? Can he overcome adversity? Can he stop staring at pony flanks?
8196374 I understand the reason behind it. I just personally think that it could have been better in a more streamlined way but it's still okay the way it is now.
A bit of a backstory dump there but over it's still an okay chapter. Hopefully, I see a new chapter soon.
8196359 yeah, I just thought it'd be a good...ish way of getting the message of what issues I'll be using for the story
8196374 I understand the reason behind it. I just personally think that it could have been better in a more streamlined way but it's still okay the way it is now.
Please continue
Nnnnnoooooooooo​!! The suspense!!!!!
Damn for a first story this is a damn good one keep up the good job see you next chapter
More please this is awesome even if the chapters are a little short.
Wait so sweatibelle is raritys daughter in this timeline?
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