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Judging from the first 2 chapters i must say i am liking this story. Hope this story continues and continues to get better.
As I have read this it has come to my liking and Imam anxious and ready for any more chapters. But please by all means take your time to write this story to make it as go quality read as u can.
A bit of a backstory dump there but over it's still an okay chapter. Hopefully, I see a new chapter soon.
8196359 yeah, I just thought it'd be a good...ish way of getting the message of what issues I'll be using for the story
8196374 I understand the reason behind it. I just personally think that it could have been better in a more streamlined way but it's still okay the way it is now.
Please continue
Nnnnnoooooooooo​!! The suspense!!!!!
Damn for a first story this is a damn good one keep up the good job see you next chapter
More please this is awesome even if the chapters are a little short.
So far the story seems to be going just fine i actually can't wait for more chapters. I'm having fun reading these.
Please just write more when u can because I love this story, its turning out great
First of all.< I like this story so far, I believe it is one of the better versions of A Death in Equestria story. So far, I think it is on par with the story: The Dark Entity by Raven Nevermore
I do have one minor complaint. This.
For some reason that I just can't put my finger on, this is actually painful to read. I don't know if its the fact that it feels "shoehorned in", for the sole purpose of describing (Very generically, in a dictionary sort of way) what the mane 6 look like to those who have never seen the show. It just feels really badly written........My point is that lining them up like that in a "police line up" style of introduction doesn't feel natural. Its better when an Author describes the characters in a spread out sort of way, one at a time throughout the chapter. After all, each character will speak or perform an action throughout the chapter. Making that particular paragraph perfect for adding the characters physical description. It also flows more naturally in the narrative.
Other than that minor complaint, your doing a great job and I am looking forward to more.
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In this story death is also the angel of wisdom, he gathers as much knowledge as he can as quickly as he can, paying attention to every detail that seems important, the elements, are important, thus he immediately takes note of them.
That's genius and fun!
Aww man I hope you update this story soon it's getting very interesting too read
Wait so sweatibelle is raritys daughter in this timeline?
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yeparooni
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Welp you learn something new everyday
As some story, please keep it up
Well discord is in a bit of trouble
What is this a crossover of?
Discord gonna have to bite the pillow~
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It's not a crossover, it's just an in general angel of death, in this story, pretty much all the gods/angels/devils are real.
I'll wait for more
Oh Discord you are screwed. If DEATH is pissed at you, you can pretty much just kiss your ass goodbye.
YOU'RE CRUUUUUUUEEEELLLL!!!!
Please continue.
Hello?
Why such a big cliffhanger, and why leave it alone so long. Please, please continue this amazing story!!